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小学英语专题作文:A letter for Mum

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发表于 2018-2-8 23:29:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  给妈妈的一封信 A letter for Mum
       
          就一般的家庭而言,妈妈跟孩子的关系通常是最密切的。妈妈从怀孕开始就和小孩产生难以割舍的情感,借这封信表达你和妈妈的互动,你想跟妈妈说的话,你对妈妈的感动等等。最后,再加上你想报答妈妈的方法,就能完成一篇动人的书信哦。
       
          写作技巧(Tips)
       
          你曾经写过信给妈妈吗?可能我们平常跟妈妈生活在一起,觉得写信没有什么必要,但其实有很多事情也许我们想让妈妈知道,但是又不好意思直接开口。那么就写信吧。一开始就写出要对妈妈说的事情哦。
       
          我们第一段的建议开头句就是:Today I’m going to tell you something really special.今天我要跟你说一件非常特别的事情。
       
          因为是写信,所以不用不好意思哦。把平常心中对妈妈的一些感受给表达出来吧。
       
          我们第二段的建议开头句就是:I also want to tell you one thing, I love you so much.我还想告诉你一件事情,我真的很爱你。
       
          平常妈妈真的对我们照顾地无微不至,最后我们就写出报答妈妈的方法。妈妈看了,一定会很高兴。
       
          我们第三段的建议开头句就是:I made up my mind that I will study harder and help you to clean the house.我已经下定决心要更努力地用功读书,并且帮你把家里整理干净
       
          现在让我们来听听Peter的文章
       
          亲爱的妈咪 Dear Mum. 今天我要跟你说一件非常特别的事情。Today I’m going to tell you something really special. 我知道你每天都很辛苦地工作,也感到很疲惫。I know you work very hard and feel tired every day.每当你回家看到家里一团乱的时候,我知道你一定很生我的气。Every time you come home and see the messy house. , I know you are very angry with me.但是你总是一句话也不说的把房子给整理干净。But you always say nothing and clean up the house.其实我也一直很想帮你,但是我的回家功课真的很多。I always want to help you, but I have so much homework to do.每次把功课写完以后,都觉得快要死掉了。After I finished my homework, I feel like dying.我真的很想帮忙,但是我也觉得好累哦。I really want to help you, but I’m so tired too.
       
          我还想告诉你一件事情,我真的很爱你。I also want to tell you one thing, I love you so much.虽然每次你念我不够用功的时候,我都会顶嘴。I usually talk back to you when you say that I don’t study hard enough.但事实上,我只是想要你再多称赞我一点。But in fact I just want you to praise me more.我一定会尽我所能得到好成绩,并且受到老师的赞扬。I will try my best to get good grades and get praise from my teacher.所以不要再因为我的成绩而感到沮丧了,好吗?So don’t feel frustrated about my grades, OK?
       
          我已经下定决心要更努力地用功读书,并且帮你把家里整理干净I made up my mind that I will study harder and help you to clean the house.这次我可是认真的哦I am serious this time.我会尽快把作业完成,这样我才能有更多的精力帮你整理家里。I will have my homework done faster so that I can have more energy to clean up the house.我也会尽量少看一点电视,这样我才有更多的时间用功读书得到好成绩。I will watch TV less so that I can have more time to study and get good grades.而这所有的事情都只为了一个原因:妈咪,我想要让你开心。我爱你!All these things are for one reason: I want to make you happy Mum. I love you! 非常非常爱你的彼得。With lots of love Peter
       
          整篇文章。
       
          Dear Mum:
       
          Today I’m going to tell you something really special. I know you work very hard and feel tired every day. Every time you come home and see the messy house. , I know you are very angry with me. But you always say nothing and clean up the house .I always want to help you, but I have so much homework to do. After I finish my homework, I feel like dying. I really want to help you, but I’m so tired too.
       
          I also want to tell you one thing, I love you so much. I usually talk back to you when you say that I don’t study hard enough. But in fact I just want you to praise me more. I will try my best to get good grades and get praise from my teacher. So don’t feel frustrated about my grades, OK? I made up my mind that I will study harder and help you to clean the house. I am serious this time. I will have my homework done faster so that I can have more energy to clean up the house. I will watch TV less so that I can have more time to study and get good grades. All these things are for one reason: I want to make you happy Mum. I love you!
       
          With lots of love Peter
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