小升初英语写作要领：词语简化技巧

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想到一点儿写作细节上的小技巧，和大家分享一下：
       
        　　策略之一：用介词短语替代从句。
       
        　　例:　　
       
        　　原句: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
       
        　　修改后: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
       
        　　原句: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
       
        　　修改后: At the second traffic light turn left.
       
       
        　　策略之二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。
       
        　　例:
       
        　　原句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
       
        　　修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
       
        　　注：把句中的”three parts”改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词”which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如”that”去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。
       
         
       
       
               
       
       
                 
       
       
                　　策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词。
               
                　　"Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "
               
                　　写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词”joint”和”telephone”，注意删去不必要的词。