五年级英语作文及点评：My Favourite Food

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　　导语：奥数网给同学们汇总了小学五年级英语作文范文及点评，希望同学们的英语学习有所帮助。以下为五年级英语作文范文：
       
        　　My Favourite Food
       
        　　Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
       
        　　How about you? What’s your favourite food?
       
        　　【要领点评】
       
        　　My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。